tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post4452042164652993574..comments2023-06-13T07:54:16.090-04:00Comments on Raging, Ranting, Raving, and Rhapsodizing: Three Word WednesdayRachelRenaehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09032395594956578140noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-26652485483504847472008-09-19T11:07:00.000-04:002008-09-19T11:07:00.000-04:00Thanks everyone!!Thanks everyone!!RachelRenaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09032395594956578140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-38980937717096933232008-09-19T09:50:00.000-04:002008-09-19T09:50:00.000-04:00Welome to 3WW! One good story for a start!Welome to 3WW! One good story for a start!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-3448750053511150972008-09-19T09:25:00.000-04:002008-09-19T09:25:00.000-04:00Good storytelling. I enjoyed your story and I am s...Good storytelling. I enjoyed your story and I am sure this was a true story at one time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-57292392001859931192008-09-18T00:33:00.000-04:002008-09-18T00:33:00.000-04:00that's awesome Rachel!that's awesome Rachel!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04758498095548193380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-53327738775721627332008-09-18T00:11:00.000-04:002008-09-18T00:11:00.000-04:00Definitely good story telling. Torn between what h...Definitely good story telling. Torn between what he loves and what is expected of him. Struggles within a family. You have all the makings of a good story.TDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10411110456297096938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-75524609542740235342008-09-17T21:22:00.000-04:002008-09-17T21:22:00.000-04:00I like this story! It captured my interest right ...I like this story! It captured my interest right away and held it throughout.Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-6271421272944023692008-09-17T20:50:00.000-04:002008-09-17T20:50:00.000-04:00Welcome! Good story...Welcome! Good story...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-42498311944709850222008-09-17T20:25:00.000-04:002008-09-17T20:25:00.000-04:00I liked it. I'm not a writer, but as a reader it ...I liked it. I'm not a writer, but as a reader it makes me want to know more about what happened to Ahmed!Janellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13460780906528502160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-38986293101116733312008-09-17T12:35:00.000-04:002008-09-17T12:35:00.000-04:00thomg: thanks! I really do appreciate constructiv...thomg: thanks! I really do appreciate constructive criticism.<BR/><BR/>Stephen: those words just felt italic in my mind... but i can see how you would be confused. I put the words prompts in blue.RachelRenaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09032395594956578140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-14347130357083264532008-09-17T12:22:00.000-04:002008-09-17T12:22:00.000-04:00That was really good. I like, "an island of indiff...That was really good. I like, "an island of indifference in the sea of activity around him."<BR/><BR/>I don't get the words though. The words you italicized and the words you listed at the top of the post aren't the same - I must not get how this works.StephenHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00326964109222226247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32084505.post-70166610055286527362008-09-17T11:20:00.000-04:002008-09-17T11:20:00.000-04:00Glad you've decided to dip a toe in. Not to be ove...Glad you've decided to dip a toe in. Not to be over-critical, but you've got a couple of tense issues, but overall, a great piece. Struggles of emotion are great fodder for storytelling.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.com